Proven examples—and why they work—to help you craft essays that stand out to adcoms.
Your personal statement is the single most important essay you will write for your med school applications.
Unsurprisingly, we receive more questions about the personal statement than any other admissions topic, questions like:
“What topic should I write about?”
“Do I need to discuss “the moment” I knew I wanted to become a doctor?”
“Should I focus on my medical extracurriculars, or can I also discuss personal stories?”
And so on. What most students end up doing is searching for “tips” on how to write a good essay yet end up staring at a blank page, unsure what to write about.
Eventually, students begin to read every sample essay they can get their hands on, hoping that consuming countless examples will give them the “aha” moment they need to produce their own personal statement.
Here’s the problem: Without understanding why an essay is strong, you risk producing a cliché essay based on some “template” you came across.
Having read thousands of personal statements over the years, we can easily tell when an essay was written by “an example chaser,” the type of essay that would lead an adcom to yawn and move on the to the next application.
We’ve also assisted students with producing personal statements that led to adcoms sending notes about how much they enjoyed reading the essay.
When you read personal statement examples, it’s important to focus on the following:
Does the applicant demonstrate qualities that are desirable in a physician? If so, which ones?
Is the personal statement mostly about the applicant, or other people?
Could anyone else have written this personal statement, or is it unique to the applicant?
Does the personal statement cover too much, or is there real depth?
Collectively, we refer to this as the QPUD method, which you can apply to your own writing to understand whether you’re on the right track.
To help you with the idea generation and evaluation process, we've created a library of 220+ unique personal statement examples with paragraph-by-paragraph analyses of each, arranged into 17 essay categories and organized in a single location.
Each category reveals numerous examples of proven approaches to medical school personal statement essays, so you can finally upgrade your writing from bland to memorable.
“Aha” Moment
Personal statements in this category focus on a lightbulb moment or inciting incident when an applicant decided to pursue medicine. This single, meaningful moment put them on a trajectory toward a career in medicine or significantly changed the way that they view the field.
Creative Hook
Personal statements in this category begin with a unique and creative introductory paragraph, demonstrating how an essay can simultaneously catch a reader’s attention and introduce key ideas and themes.
Healthcare Disparities
Personal statements in this category focus on one of two key paths toward medicine, either (1) an applicant’s firsthand experience of healthcare disparities in their community or (2) their longstanding commitment to fighting against healthcare disparities through volunteer work or employment. These essays often discuss social determinants of health, such as income, race, ethnicity, sexual orientation, etc.
Humanities in Medicine
Personal statements in this category discuss how applicants were inspired by and hope to apply the tenets of the humanities—such as story, narrative, personal history, relationship building—within medicine.
Immigrant/Immigrant Family
Personal statements in this category focus on how an applicant’s membership in an immigrant community or family inspired their pursuit or understanding of medicine. The applicants from these essays are typically first- or second-generation Americans with close ties to their family’s country of origin or culture from which they draw core values.
International Applicant
Personal statements in this category feature applicants who were born or raised outside of the US for a significant portion of their lives, even during the application cycle itself. Strictly speaking, international applicants hold citizenship in another country and apply to a US medical school while holding residency elsewhere, even if they worked towards their undergraduate degree in the US.
Nontraditional Applicant
Personal statements in this category discuss less typical or traditional paths to a career in medicine, such as having taken an extensive gap year period (e.g., greater than five years) or having pursued another career before pursuing medicine.
Osteopathic/Holistic Medicine
Personal statements in this category are examples of strong essays to send to DO programs, as they focus on holistic healing, social determinants of health, the mind/body connection, and more.
Patient Applicant
Personal statements in this category feature applicants who are or have been patients themselves, either due to a chronic condition or a traumatic injury. Essays in this category demonstrate how the applicant’s illness or injury drove their initial pursuit of a career in medicine.
Physician Parents
Personal statements in this category are from applicants inspired by their parent’s or parents’ careers to pursue medicine, sometimes reluctantly at first and sometimes with enthusiasm. Although applicants who have physician parents are not required to discuss this attribute in their essay, if they choose to, they should ensure that they explore their genuine passion for medicine apart from their parents’ influence, too.
Public/Community Health
Personal statements in this category focus on public health issues like epidemics, addiction, lack of community resources, and more. Authors of these essays are often passionate about becoming a community health physician at a free clinic or working in primary care or public health to combat these issues.
Religious Applicant
Although many applicants may identify as religious, many avoid this topic in their personal statement because it can feel safer to do so. Personal statements in this category feature applicants who cannot separate their pursuit of medicine from their religious values and beliefs. Notice how all applicants here focus on the positive values that their religious or spiritual beliefs instilled in them that will be helpful in medicine.
Sick Family Member
Many applicants are drawn to pursue medicine due to an illness or injury in their family, so personal statements in this category focus on how those inciting or catalyzing incidents spurred an applicant to apply to medical school.
Texas/TMDSAS Applicant
Personal statements in this category feature applicants from Texas or interested in practicing medicine in Texas. Although not explicitly required, if applying through TMDSAS, applicants should strive to touch upon their familiarity with Texas communities, as schools often highly favor in-state residents.
Longstanding Interest in Medicine
Personal statements in this category cover a wide breadth of experiences and goals; however, their uniting trait is that all tell the story of an applicant who has known since childhood or the beginning of college that they wanted to pursue medicine.
Unusual Path to Medicine
Personal statements in this category feature applicants who face an unusual “aha” moment, often one that isn’t obviously related to medicine on the surface. These essays unpack how seemingly unrelated experiences—sometimes in another major, with animals, or with a separate hobby—drew the applicant to medicine and resulted in a unique and surprising perspective on its practice.
Women’s/Reproductive Health
Personal statements in this category involve applicants interested in a career primarily serving women or addressing reproductive issues. Some essays in this category focus heavily on advocacy efforts to protect women’s reproductive care; however, all are careful to focus on the medical consequences rather than broad political statements.
Whether you haven’t yet written a word of your personal statement or would like an analysis tool for your essay, these strong examples with corresponding analyses and strategies will help you take your work to the finish line.
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